Completely and utterly enjoyed the update. And i love the revamp of the page and all of the customization is sooo cool!! Must have taken you God knows how long. I cant even imagine the amount of work you did. GREAT JOB!
I loved it. Didn't see any bugs besides a slight issue where I can't scroll past save slot 4. Have no issue scrolling the menu page or while reading but when I want to save it only shows until save slot 4 and I'm not able to scroll any lower. Thats about all.
Good luck with the rest of the story and writing. You are doing so great thank you for sharing with us. ♥️
The switching around of acts confused me a bit and there were a couple of places where the section was the same but the continuity felt off, the only major one I can think of is when it refers to the pet, Chino, as a dog and a cat in the same sentence.
OTHERWISE.....
I totally love this!!!!
I get distracted and bored really easily, but the plot was super engaging and overall, it's really well written. You've got a diamond in the rough; this piece has a lot of potential and I look forward to seeing where it goes. Great work. I've been reading a lot of interactive fiction lately and so far, this is among my favorites.
This game is amazing. Ngl, I went into this quite casually just like not expecting anything honestly, but I was absolutely blown away by the writing.
The way you build the atmosphere and create tension was just phenomenal, and I was shocked at how the lore of the story actually sucked me in. It fascinated me so much and do not get me started on the characterization. I don't know how you did it, but every single character like every single one just made me fall in love with them. They were given so much life and meaning that it made me just fall in love.
I hope that you will continue this story, and I will for sure be keeping a keen eye on it.
It's really good. I did notice some spelling mistakes but its not bad were it will take people out of the story just one of them will, it on the closet part trying to get out of the bedroom I think. slide off your bed is spelled wrong. sorry I forgot how to take a screen shot with my computer so I just pasted the sentence xD.
"You side of your bed, putting the large object between you and the closet door. Slowly back up until you reach the furthest wall. Your bedroom door was on the other side of the room, merely a few feet from your closet."
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Completely and utterly enjoyed the update. And i love the revamp of the page and all of the customization is sooo cool!! Must have taken you God knows how long. I cant even imagine the amount of work you did. GREAT JOB!
I loved it. Didn't see any bugs besides a slight issue where I can't scroll past save slot 4. Have no issue scrolling the menu page or while reading but when I want to save it only shows until save slot 4 and I'm not able to scroll any lower. Thats about all.
Good luck with the rest of the story and writing. You are doing so great thank you for sharing with us. ♥️
I've just discovered this gem, where the hell was I all this time :/?
The switching around of acts confused me a bit and there were a couple of places where the section was the same but the continuity felt off, the only major one I can think of is when it refers to the pet, Chino, as a dog and a cat in the same sentence.
OTHERWISE.....
I totally love this!!!!
I get distracted and bored really easily, but the plot was super engaging and overall, it's really well written. You've got a diamond in the rough; this piece has a lot of potential and I look forward to seeing where it goes. Great work. I've been reading a lot of interactive fiction lately and so far, this is among my favorites.
Is it possible to have a monogamous relationship in this game?
It is!!
This game is amazing. Ngl, I went into this quite casually just like not expecting anything honestly, but I was absolutely blown away by the writing.
The way you build the atmosphere and create tension was just phenomenal, and I was shocked at how the lore of the story actually sucked me in. It fascinated me so much and do not get me started on the characterization. I don't know how you did it, but every single character like every single one just made me fall in love with them. They were given so much life and meaning that it made me just fall in love.
I hope that you will continue this story, and I will for sure be keeping a keen eye on it.
wooooow. already hooked like a fish
It's really good. I did notice some spelling mistakes but its not bad were it will take people out of the story just one of them will, it on the closet part trying to get out of the bedroom I think. slide off your bed is spelled wrong. sorry I forgot how to take a screen shot with my computer so I just pasted the sentence xD.
"You side of your bed, putting the large object between you and the closet door. Slowly back up until you reach the furthest wall. Your bedroom door was on the other side of the room, merely a few feet from your closet."
Thank you!! Hopefully I’ve fixed!! Aswell as gone back and fixed any other spelling errors!
Words cannot express how deeply in love I am with this if game! From characters to writing, everything is perfection <3
Thank you so much!!! I am really happy with how the first chapter came out and I’m really happy that you’ve enjoyed it!!