I gata say, the little sister is crueler than i ever was to anyone about being invisible and not the favorite. It makes it hard to sympathize with her.
this was a great story and rewrite!!! Ive read both versions and wowie!!! does the patreon go past chapter6? Looking forward to this continuation of this wonderful story!!!
aaaaaa i love the rewrite so muuuch and i cannot WAIT for the rest. (i mean i can and will. sorry, no pressure, i'm just so excited!!)
i was hooked before the rewrite and ngl, this just made me so much worse.
i'm not just obssessed, i am ✨ O B S S E S S E D ✨ like. with confetti and glitter and mouth froth. i will not be able to stop thinking about this for the rest of my life.
also. during that one scene. that one. the fact that a canine-flavoured demon tried to keep my mc, not-canine, from swallowing something they shouldn't was so fuckin funny to me
ooo a 4 way poly i see? I love that! Demon , Dragon and Warden with mc I love it! Sadly thou she is well a she no male lol so I will stick with Demon and Warden
Wonderful writing, interesting characters, and lovely intricate descriptions of the story and setting. I also loved how many options there were and it truly made the story feel more open world/ customizable.
With that being said, there does need to be some work on grammatical errors/ typos and at some point in the story the people with the W genes got mixed up with the people without the W genes which was confusing (when Dante first encountered the group of male humans with MC after they left MC's apartment and he commented on their scent). But otherwise the story and writing and everything else is wonderful! I know you're working on rewriting this so I'm sure these will be addressed after the next update. I'm looking forward to seeing more! Take all the time you need! ☺️💕
I tried playing the game, but I'm not sure if it's complex to just me or maybe I'm just an idiot but I was just so confused as I played this. There are some grammatical errors that I can tell at first glance, but the story is extremely different from what I've seen and played before and that is a good thing. The appearance choices are by far the most diverse in questions I've ever seen, but the hair and eye colors are somewhat lacking, you give the choice to say your hair is locked but there isn't a hair length revolving around having your hair braided or something similar. As far as the eyes go, I was kinda hoping for heterochromia or possibly having a missing eye but than again we are 22. I was very confused as I played but I enjoyed what I understood and think this a good game.
When is chapter six going to be released? I tried looking for if you posted anything about updating, but couldn't find anything atm. I love your works, they are very well written and the plot/storyline is very interesting and makes me want to read more, even though I tend to hate reading in general. Hope you have a good day!! <3
Gah dayumn! This was hot! Characters are hot! Writing is hot! Can't wait to update! Wholly awesome. and the ending was 👁️👄👁️ uh huh I'm side eyeing that one...
I did play it again and pay attention to the personality stats and when you saying you get along with your dad part where you get to pic your relationship kindness restarts I was at 60 and it went down to 50 again and when before you make a pac with dante when you can you don't trust him or you worried going to hurt it kind of werid when you say you are scared that it hurt the relationship with dante should as it should which it does but so does being trusting but not trusting goes up which makes no sense but when you tell him you don't trust him my 65 in trusting stays the same but relationship don't change
This is my new comfort game <3 It's frustrating not being able to fight back, but it's also nice being taken care of by huge demon dog man. I hope we get to do something useful soon though.
Yeh I was confused when came across that as someone who prefers to play male characters. It was confusing and I noticed the character description will say you don't have the male parts if you say no to breasts on that lol
Dante pulls you into his arms, enveloping you in his constant warmth. (after choosing not to share a bed and trying to move away from him)
"Here. Take my hand."
You do, feeling him grip your hand tightly but gently before helping you out the wide window and onto the roof, keeping a hold on you. (No hesitation? Sometimes it feels like my own MC doesn't even know they're touch adverse)
Basically he whole of chapter 5, which wouldn't be a problem if MC actually spoke on it more or showed actual discomfort; creating some sort of understanding with Dante and any of the other characters, that they need permission.
I hope I don't sound mean, i never want to come off nasty to any of you writers/authors. Chapter 1 was great in that regard, it was actually acknowledged multiple times. But idk, I just think the best option would be to remove it as a whole. That way the people who pick it, don't get such a shock when the plot comes into play.
You're right!! I think at the moment alot of the options come out short and straight up ignored die to time limitations on my part as a whole but that this is ultimately a demo and there are various things I need to rework at a later date, but I do thank you for pointing that out.
First of all, I love the customization option! So simple and efficient! as for the story! It really enjoyed it! Well done! I encountered some mispelled/misused word but it's nothing a little tweaking cannot fix. You did well with this OP! I am looking forward to more!
PS. Already torn between Dante and Warden shdfsdkgfsdf <3
Hi there i just foound this game and i absolutely love it! though i did find some typos so since i dont know if there are any place where i ca report it other than here i the comments, i'll just show it here
those who have not played the game beware of spoilers!
this one was from when we ask Dante why he attacked us^
this ones in his bio
this ones the last typo i found, and its found after Dante tells us about his memory of one of our sibs!
anyway all these typos are pretty small but i wanted to tell you, anyway keep up the great work!
I usually don't comment, but the story grabbed me, not to mention the prospect of the characters.❤❤ I love Dante and I love the details and the amount of choices. The way you write makes me feel like we really connect with the characters and what surrounds us. Great job, take care of yourself.✨✨
I didn't know that it got updated until I saw some asks on your Tumblr that caused me to check to see if it got updated. Holy crap, I didn't want the current chapter to end. So I can't wait for the following Friday for chapter four to be released.
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Error just from trying to start up the game.
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Thank you for letting me know!! The issue has been resolved
i love the redo 🤓 on that note,
I gata say, the little sister is crueler than i ever was to anyone about being invisible and not the favorite. It makes it hard to sympathize with her.
this was a great story and rewrite!!! Ive read both versions and wowie!!! does the patreon go past chapter6? Looking forward to this continuation of this wonderful story!!!
aaaaaa i love the rewrite so muuuch and i cannot WAIT for the rest. (i mean i can and will. sorry, no pressure, i'm just so excited!!)
i was hooked before the rewrite and ngl, this just made me so much worse.
i'm not just obssessed, i am ✨ O B S S E S S E D ✨ like. with confetti and glitter and mouth froth. i will not be able to stop thinking about this for the rest of my life.
also. during that one scene. that one. the fact that a canine-flavoured demon tried to keep my mc, not-canine, from swallowing something they shouldn't was so fuckin funny to me
absolute cinema omg
Is only the first chapter available? Because I can't go forward. After the act six, it loops back to the starting screen.
No! I just updated this and added a death scene, that's clearer! But you died in Chapter One if it seems to loop! Hopefully it's clear now!!
Mine stops at chapter one act six. Is this normal?
No! I just updated this and added a death scene, that's clearer! But you died in Chapter One if it seems to loop! Hopefully it's clear now!!
Not sure what I'm doing wrong it anything but for mobile at least I can't move this is the most I can see
you can go to the settings and toggle the fullscreen mode, it works for me :)
Thank you for letting me know!! With mobile, I've fixed it so it's automatically portrait!!
OH MY GOD??? THE REWRITES ARE FINALLY OUT!!! IM SO HYPED MAN AHHHH
ooo a 4 way poly i see? I love that! Demon , Dragon and Warden with mc I love it! Sadly thou she is well a she no male lol so I will stick with Demon and Warden
HELLO??? THR PROFILES?? IM LEVITATING
IM SO JOLLY RN
Super excited for the rewritten chapters 1-6 this year! Are you planning on releasing them by the end of January?? Have a good day/night!
Wonderful writing, interesting characters, and lovely intricate descriptions of the story and setting. I also loved how many options there were and it truly made the story feel more open world/ customizable.
With that being said, there does need to be some work on grammatical errors/ typos and at some point in the story the people with the W genes got mixed up with the people without the W genes which was confusing (when Dante first encountered the group of male humans with MC after they left MC's apartment and he commented on their scent). But otherwise the story and writing and everything else is wonderful! I know you're working on rewriting this so I'm sure these will be addressed after the next update. I'm looking forward to seeing more! Take all the time you need! ☺️💕
I tried playing the game, but I'm not sure if it's complex to just me or maybe I'm just an idiot but I was just so confused as I played this. There are some grammatical errors that I can tell at first glance, but the story is extremely different from what I've seen and played before and that is a good thing. The appearance choices are by far the most diverse in questions I've ever seen, but the hair and eye colors are somewhat lacking, you give the choice to say your hair is locked but there isn't a hair length revolving around having your hair braided or something similar. As far as the eyes go, I was kinda hoping for heterochromia or possibly having a missing eye but than again we are 22. I was very confused as I played but I enjoyed what I understood and think this a good game.
When is chapter six going to be released? I tried looking for if you posted anything about updating, but couldn't find anything atm. I love your works, they are very well written and the plot/storyline is very interesting and makes me want to read more, even though I tend to hate reading in general. Hope you have a good day!! <3
Right now, Chapters 1 - 6 are all being rewritten, with Chapters 1 - 3 finished! Im aiming for the end of the year to drop all chapters!!
Do you mean that you're releasing all the chapters at the end of the year or are you like posting periodically over the months?
Releasing all the chapters at once, then going back to periodically releasing chapters.
Publicly??
Yes!!
S-Tier Writing. Anything else is a lie and you should play this game right now.
Gah dayumn! This was hot! Characters are hot! Writing is hot! Can't wait to update! Wholly awesome. and the ending was 👁️👄👁️ uh huh I'm side eyeing that one...
IS THIS NOT THE BEST IF EVER?????
NOOO I DID NOT EXPECT THAT ENDING, I REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE UPDATES ON THIS, I LITERALLY LOVE DANTE
I did play it again and pay attention to the personality stats and when you saying you get along with your dad part where you get to pic your relationship kindness restarts I was at 60 and it went down to 50 again and when before you make a pac with dante when you can you don't trust him or you worried going to hurt it kind of werid when you say you are scared that it hurt the relationship with dante should as it should which it does but so does being trusting but not trusting goes up which makes no sense but when you tell him you don't trust him my 65 in trusting stays the same but relationship don't change
I am stuck on literally the same problem! Y do i feel like the stats r overly confusing?
Would you ever consider making your games downloadable? My internet connection is unreliable.
AIEEEEEE DANTE IS SO FUCKING HOT OAHDIFRPPESMSBM
i absolutely cannot wait for more
totally not for more interactions with our smegsy bloodhoundhate say but love it my fav is F-24 XD nuts right? maybe because he pretty much only cares for you :O
This is my new comfort game <3 It's frustrating not being able to fight back, but it's also nice being taken care of by huge demon dog man. I hope we get to do something useful soon though.
this is so incredibly funny
Yeh I was confused when came across that as someone who prefers to play male characters. It was confusing and I noticed the character description will say you don't have the male parts if you say no to breasts on that lol
Yep lol it confused me as well so I guess it's a typo o,o i think so i click yes to breasts XD <,,< right??? I am not sure anymore XD!
happy 100 days to this. 💪i honestly forgot this ever existed
is this game that legit? I literally just made a profile today and was browsing and hear a lot of good things about it.
Loved the update! Looking forward to more!
Dante pulls you into his arms, enveloping you in his constant warmth. (after choosing not to share a bed and trying to move away from him)
Basically he whole of chapter 5, which wouldn't be a problem if MC actually spoke on it more or showed actual discomfort; creating some sort of understanding with Dante and any of the other characters, that they need permission.
I hope I don't sound mean, i never want to come off nasty to any of you writers/authors. Chapter 1 was great in that regard, it was actually acknowledged multiple times. But idk, I just think the best option would be to remove it as a whole. That way the people who pick it, don't get such a shock when the plot comes into play.
You're right!! I think at the moment alot of the options come out short and straight up ignored die to time limitations on my part as a whole but that this is ultimately a demo and there are various things I need to rework at a later date, but I do thank you for pointing that out.
WAIT AM I TRIPPIN IT’S SUPPOSED TO UPDATE TODAY RIGHT??
YAY AN UPDATE!!
First of all, I love the customization option! So simple and efficient!
as for the story! It really enjoyed it! Well done! I encountered some mispelled/misused word but it's nothing a little tweaking cannot fix. You did well with this OP! I am looking forward to more!
PS. Already torn between Dante and Warden shdfsdkgfsdf <3Damn that's a first time i see harem route😳 sign me up! Lol
dante is so DADDYY.
Hi there i just foound this game and i absolutely love it! though i did find some typos so since i dont know if there are any place where i ca report it other than here i the comments, i'll just show it here
those who have not played the game beware of spoilers!
this one was from when we ask Dante why he attacked us^
this ones in his bio
this ones the last typo i found, and its found after Dante tells us about his memory of one of our sibs!
anyway all these typos are pretty small but i wanted to tell you, anyway keep up the great work!
everyone is so hot omg im fainting
The moment I read mary janes my heart did a backflip tho im sad you can't be a gyaru in here GREAT GAME I LOVE IT
Definitely gonna add that option!
OMG TY SM IM LITERALLY DOING HAPPY TWIRLS
I have a bug where I'm unable to change any of the drop-down options. How can I fix this?
Knowing that I'll have a difficult time choosing between Dante and the warden in the future, makes me smile.
I usually don't comment, but the story grabbed me, not to mention the prospect of the characters.❤❤ I love Dante and I love the details and the amount of choices. The way you write makes me feel like we really connect with the characters and what surrounds us. Great job, take care of yourself.✨✨
Pd: I can't wait to meet Warden!!❤
I didn't know that it got updated until I saw some asks on your Tumblr that caused me to check to see if it got updated. Holy crap, I didn't want the current chapter to end. So I can't wait for the following Friday for chapter four to be released.
The update was amazing as always ✨